Draft contents Page

I have done a number of initial attempts of my contents page, and will use feedback from my target audience to adapt and alter my magazine.

This was my first attempt of a contents page. I decided to do one contents page for each cover and decide which set I liked the most, and so kept the layout and colour scheme relevant to one of each of my covers. I asked my peers for feedback on my first attempt of a contents page, and they said that there was too much dead space along the right of my page and in the centre, which is the first place that you see when you open the page. They also said that again the colour scheme was too dull and so I decided to stop using the colour scheme and changed it.

This is my second attempt of a magazine contents page, with a different layout used as I tried to make my magazine more conventional. My peers told me that this layout was better although there is again too much dead space down the right of my page, and they also told me that they thought it was hard to see the link to the PlayStation.

This is my third attempt of a magazine contents page, and I have taken my second attempt of a contents page. My peers said that this contents page was an improvement on my previous attempts as it has a stronger colour scheme allowing the text to be read more easily. However the design of the contents background becomes distracting over time. I was also advised to put all of my text on one side of the page as it is then easier to follow.

For my fourth attempt of my contents page I changed the colour scheme again to suit the feedback I had previously received, and adjusted the layout so that my text was in one block on the side of my page. My peers said that one solid line of red through the page made it hard to read and so advised me to change the pattern of my background.