Mock up contents pages

 

 



 



 

For feedback on my contents page I have generally been given the impression that my font was too big, but I will be sure to change this for my final piece. I have also been told that the colour scheme I have used is a little confusing with regard to what is on each page.

Mock up covers

 

I have asked my peers for their opinions of my cover pages, and have gathered feedback for improvements.

Peer one said that my cover follows the same colour scheme and is very suited to the text. The layout of the page is also good as it is easy to follow and not overcrowded.

When asked about this cover they said that the background suits the text as it allows it to stand out and is easy to read, it also follows a single colour scheme which gives it a professional look. However, I was advised to consider removing my kickers as they did not look professional with the background clashing too much.

For this my peers said that the text suits the style of background I have used, and snoop looks like he fits in with this type of surrounding. The colour of text is also important as it makes the more important information stand out in the text. One criticism is that the background is a little too dull.